Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions – Review & Giveaway

Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions storyline is very different from canon but it is clean, simple and captivating because it avoids major alterations that could scare away the reader.

The main difference in this book is that the Bennet family lives in Derbyshire and Mr. Bennet is a vicar whose patron is Mr. Darcy. The vicarage is but a mile away from Pemberley and Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy have known each other their entire lives. This changes everything in the story because when the book starts we see that Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth are good friends and she is someone whose opinions he values and from whom he seeks advice. I found their relationship and comradery very soothing, and the Pemberley setting enhanced that feeling. Most of the story is placed at Pemberley and the restricted scenario along with the relationship between the main characters made this book a very agreeable story.

Unlike other books, Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions doesn’t start with a conflict or dislike between the main characters. Darcy and Elizabeth’s conflict free relationship was something I enjoyed during most of the book and I only wish Mr. Darcy hadn’t been so obtuse for so long. He had some attitudes that I didn’t like, but somehow, in this book, I could understand them. I believe that Maria Grace should be praised for her writing skills, because in fact, Darcy’s character is a little different then canon, but I loved him nonetheless.

The conflict only appears when Mr. Darcy decides to throw a house party with several guests, namely the Bingley’s, Anne De Bourgh, Col. Fitzwilliam and the Garlands, two original characters who will be the cause of much turmoil. I found those characters very interesting in the beginning of the book, but as the story advanced, I started to feel some discomfort towards them. If I think about their dialogues and behavior during the entire story, I can’t figure them out, and that was the main quibble I had with this book. I wish their motives and evolution as characters had been made more clear to the reader.

The other major difference in the story is Georgiana’s character. She is portrayed as someone with dyslexia, and that changes her personality because at the time people didn’t know what that was or how to properly teach students with dyslexia, which means her tutors thought she was either dumb or lazy due to her difficulties in reading or writing. She causes Darcy many headaches throughout the entire story and to be honest I liked that change in this book. Elizabeth’s creates a bridge between Darcy and Georgiana due to her maturity and understanding and I enjoyed to see her on that role.

Overall, this story is very pleasant and it gave me a feeling of comfort. It is clean, sweet and mature, which was one of the things I loved the most about the book. Elizabeth knows Mr. Darcy like no other and he loves her as the result of years of companionship. This maturity in their feelings is not always seen in JAFF and I loved it. I’ve seen some contradictory opinions about this book, and some readers may think that Elizabeth’s personality is not true to canon, but that was the whole point of this book. Elizabeth is not Mr. Darcy’s equal on Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions and readers who accept that will enjoy it immensely, I know I did and I usually don’t like books that don’t follow canon. I definitely recommend this book to readers who like cozy, sweet romances.


You can find Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions at:


Maria Grace would like to offer one ebook of Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions to one of my readers. The giveaway is international and is open until the 3rd of November. To apply to it, all you have to do is leave a comment on this post and share your opinion on the blurb or review with us. The giveaway winner will be announced shortly after.

Good luck everyone!



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16 responses to “Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions – Review & Giveaway

  1. Maria Thomas

    Sounds like a unique variation


  2. Patricia Finnegan

    I like the fact that Georgiana has a disability. As someone who has one also, is nice to read variations when someone has it too, especially a character from a favorite book


    • That was definitely one of my favourite parts Patrícia. It must have been difficult at the time to have a disability such as this one because no one understood it, and it was interesting to see people’s reactions to it.


  3. Glynis

    I read the first chapters as Maria posted them so I now want to read the rest. I am totally baffled by the Garlands but believe they are out to cause mischief. I’m still waiting to see how Darcy finally comes to realise that Elizabeth is the answer to all his problems! (And to find out why she ran away!)


  4. Agnes

    These are intriguing insights! I like Maria’s original settings and look forward to reading this one. Thanks for the giveaway chance!


  5. Eva Edmonds

    I think the change in personalities will also add interest to a story. Maria Grace has done it numerous times, and her stories have been interesting. I like the fact that the Bennets grew up in a parsonage near Pemberley. Thank you for the giveaway.


  6. Enjoyed your review. I am not bothered that Elizabeth is not his equal as that makes it different from ones I’ve read so I look forward to reading.


  7. BeckyC

    Wonderful review. I am curious about this story. Look forward to reading


  8. Ginna

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us, Rita. I have seen elsewhere the Garlands compared to the Crawfords, which would definitely explain your discomfort with them.


  9. That is funny that we shared our reviews at the same time! So glad to hear your appreciation for this original slant and the pleasure and comfort it brought you! I agree with you about the interesting twist to Elizabeth’s character…I’ve not seen a variation explore those traits with her before! Great review, my friend!


  10. From what I gather after reading excerpts, I think Fine Eyes & Pert Opinions is a very entertaining and unique premise. And add to your review and others that have praised this novel, I think I would enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing your opinion and voicing the things that bother you about the book, Rita.


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