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I am very happy to welcome Lari Ann O’Dell at from Pemberley to Milton once more to share with all of you an excerpt of Mr. Darcy’s Phoenix. This book has fantasy flavor to it, so I hope you like the subgenre, it appears to be growing doesn’t it? I hope you all like what Ms. O’Dell decided to share with you, and don’t forget to apply to the giveaway for a chance to win this book 🙂
Thank you so much for visiting once more Ms. O’Dell and thank you for organizing the tour Janet!
I’m so glad to be back at From Pemberley to Milton to talk about my new fantasy Pride & Prejudice variation, Mr. Darcy’s Phoenix.
One of my favorite things about writing variations is adapting the scenes from the original novel. When I started writing Mr. Darcy’s Phoenix, I started to think about which scenes I wanted to adapt and where I wanted to deviate from Jane Austen’s masterpiece.
What changes characters have magic? In this variation, Mr. Darcy is a powerful fire mage, he has a phoenix familiar named Dante, and he is master of Pemberley, which serves as a conservatory for magical creatures. He has a lot to be proud of.
Elizabeth Bennet does have magical powers, but in the beginning of the book it does not appear that she has a water, nature, or fire affinity. She was educated at a prominent Seminary of Magic in London, and is considered to be very accomplished in Meryton.
One of my favorite early scenes in Pride & Prejudice takes place while Elizabeth and Jane are staying at Netherfield. It is the scene when the characters are discussing what makes an accomplished lady.
In this scene, Mr. Darcy pays a compliment to Elizabeth when Caroline Bingley is trying to disparage her connections and accomplishments.
“All this she must possess,” added Darcy, “and to all this she must yet add something more substantial, in the improvement of her mind by extensive reading.”
Elizabeth doesn’t quite catch his meaning, and still thinks he only looks upon her to find fault.
I knew I wanted to include this scene, but how was I going to adapt it to fit within the magical world of this variation? Along with the traditional ladylike accomplishments, I had to add magical ones such as being educated at a Seminary of Magic and excelling at spell work. Being in possession of an elemental affinity would have been added to Caroline Bingley’s list, but as she does not have one herself, she did not want to mention it, as it would make her seem less accomplished.
Again, Mr. Darcy pays Elizabeth a compliment, this time citing both love of extensive reading and an appreciation for magical creatures and fay folk, and she still doesn’t take it seriously. But the big magical twist on this scene is that Caroline Bingley is sort of punished for her diatribe. Her napkin catches fire and Colonel Fitzwilliam, who is also staying at Netherfield, must use his water magic to douse the flames. But who caused the napkin to ignite; Mr. Darcy, the known fire mage, or someone else?
And now I will share the scene. I hope you enjoy how I adapted it!
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After dinner that evening, Elizabeth declined to join the Bingleys and Hursts in a game of cards. Mr. Darcy sat writing a letter and consulting some matter with Colonel Fitzwilliam. Elizabeth had a volume on magical aquatic creatures from her father’s library and settled into an armchair to peruse it.
“I say, Miss Elizabeth, why should you choose a book over a game of cards?” Mr. Hurst boomed. Elizabeth looked up, surprised to be addressed by the portly gentleman who had hardly bothered to say more than two words to her since the evening she had arrived at Netherfield.
Miss Bingley laughed. “My dear brother, Miss Eliza hates cards and prefers reading to all else, and it is not even a novel she has, but a musty old tome. Surely she is too much of a bluestocking to tolerate our conversation.”
Had Elizabeth cared for Miss Bingley’s opinion, she might have been offended. As it was, the detailed sightings of kelpies across England and Scotland were far more interesting than anything Miss Bingley might have to say. Still, Elizabeth could not allow a slight to go unanswered. “I deserve neither such praise nor such censure, Miss Bingley. I do not hate cards, and I take pleasure in a great many things, but I would not wish to spoil your even numbers. A fifth card player always crowds the rest.”
The others at the card table seemed to accept that answer, but Miss Bingley’s lip curled. It was then that Elizabeth noticed the conversation had caught Mr. Darcy’s attention. He glanced up from his letter.
Miss Bingley seized on the opportunity to engage the gentleman’s attention. “Are you writing to dear Miss Darcy? Pray give her my compliments. I was just recounting to my sister that Miss Darcy had achieved full marks on her spell casting. I have never seen such talent in one so young, and her water magic is unmatched by any lady of our acquaintance!”
“I will pass along your compliments in my next letter,” Mr. Darcy said. “I have just finished the salutation, and I am sure I could not give your well wishes their due in a postscript.”
Elizabeth was surprised to hear such a remark from Mr. Darcy. Apparently he was in possession of dry humor, even if it was very slight.
Miss Bingley did not seem to catch the sarcasm of his comment. “You are such a faithful correspondent, Mr. Darcy. Miss Darcy is very fortunate to have such a devoted brother. But I have always said that she is one of the finest young ladies of my acquaintance, and she is sure to take society by storm when she makes her debut.”
Mr. Darcy made no response.
“Charles, surely you must declare that Miss Darcy is in possession of all the finest accomplishments.”
Mr. Bingley appeared surprised to be drawn in to such a conversation. “I have yet to meet a young lady who is not called accomplished by society. It amazes me that they can have the patience to be as accomplished as they all are.”
Miss Bingley scoffed. “You cannot not believe that all ladies are accomplished!”
“They paint tables, cover screens, and net purses. They practice spell work. They sing, dance, and play for hours.”
Here, Mr. Darcy spoke, “Your list is comprised of common accomplishments, but it is lacking. The word is applied far too liberally. I cannot think of half a dozen ladies who I would call truly accomplished.”
Miss Bingley seized on the opportunity to agree with Mr. Darcy with great alacrity. “Indeed, you are correct Mr. Darcy. To be truly accomplished, a young lady must have been educated at a seminary of magic and excel at spell casting. If she is not blessed with magic, she must have a thorough knowledge of music, singing, dancing, drawing, and the modern languages to deserve the word. And she must have an elegance of manner and must not gallivant through the standing stones, or the word will be half deserved.”
Elizabeth raised her eyes to Miss Bingley and longed to make a retort, but she would not allow the lady to bait her. Dante, however, ruffled his feathers in annoyance and cast a baleful look at Miss Bingley.
“To all this, she must add something more substantial,” Mr. Darcy said, “the improvement of her mind by extensive reading, and an appreciation of the magical world we inhabit. I could not call a lady accomplished who did not have an appreciation for the fay folk and the many magical creatures that reside in England.”
“Very well spoken indeed,” Colonel Fitzwilliam cried. “There are some in society that hold a disdain for the fay. I have met ladies who hold elves, nymphs, brownies, and all the rest in disdain, never realizing that the great households would not exist without the help of the fay folk.”
Miss Bingley frowned. “We must give the fay folk their due,” she admitted, albeit halfheartedly. “But I cannot declare that I have met anyone in Hertfordshire who deserves the word in the truest sense.”
Elizabeth kept herself from rolling her eyes at the comment, but only just.
“Caroline, you are too severe upon your own sex,” Mr. Bingley said. “The ladies of the neighborhood are utterly charming and admirably accomplished.”
“I suppose we will have to agree to disagree, Charles. Surely, Mr. Darcy agrees with me.”
Mr. Darcy frowned, and Elizabeth watched in fascination as his hands clenched around the edge of the writing desk. Then, Mr. Hurst’s drunken voice mingled with a loud shriek, “Caroline, your napkin!”
And indeed, the cloth napkin had caught fire. Miss Bingley jumped from her seat and threw the cloth to the floor.
Colonel Fitzwilliam reacted quickly, waving his hand and summoning water to douse the flames. Elizabeth watched the scene with horrified fascination and a small touch of guilt. She thought of the incident at Longbourn, and of the boiling tea at Rose Cottage. Was this her doing?
Her heart was gripped with a fierce anxiety. If she was somehow becoming a fire mage, she needed to know, so she could learn to control it.
When the commotion died down, Elizabeth glanced back at the desk, only to find that Mr. Darcy had left the room.
A phoenix brings them together. Will a curse keep them apart?
When the hauntingly beautiful song of a phoenix lures Elizabeth Bennet to the Netherfield gardens, she has a vision of an unknown gentleman. He whispers her name with such tenderness that she wonders if this man is her match. Unfortunately, her gift of prophecy has never been exactly reliable.
Mr. Darcy is a celebrated fire mage, the master of Pemberley, and the man from her vision. But he is not tender; he is haughty, proud, and high-handed. His insult of her during the Summer Solstice celebration makes her determined to dislike him in spite of her love for Dante, his phoenix familiar.
After Mr. Darcy is called away by his duties, Elizabeth’s magic runs wild, and it is only their reunion at Rosings that offers her any hope of controlling it. They are drawn together by their love of magical creatures and their affinity for fire. But Elizabeth soon has another vision about Mr. Darcy, one that may portend a grave danger to his life.
Can Darcy and Elizabeth overcome misunderstandings, curses, and even fate itself?
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Lari Ann O’Dell first discovered her love of Pride & Prejudice when she was eighteen. After reading a Pride & Prejudice variation she found in a closing sale at a bookstore, she said, “This is what I want to do.” She published her first novel, Mr. Darcy’s Kiss, two years later.
Born and raised in Colorado, she attended the University of Colorado in Boulder and earned a bachelor’s degree in History and Creative Writing. After graduating college, she wrote and published her second novel, Mr. Darcy’s Ship. Her third novel, Mr. Darcy’s Clan, is her first supernatural variation, and she is working on two more fantasy variations. She is now back at school and pursuing a degree in Nursing. She adores her three beautiful nephews, Hudson, Dean, and Calvin. She enjoys reading, singing, and writes whenever she can.
There is plenty more to discover about this book, so don’t forget to check out the remaining blog tour stops 🙂
August 18 Interests of a Jane Austen Girl
August 19 Austenesque Reviews
August 22 Babblings of a Bookworm
August 23 My Jane Austen Book Club
August 25 From Pemberley to Milton
August 26 My Vices and Weaknesses
August 30 Savvy Verse and Wit
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